Have been thinking alot today...well anyway, thinking so much made me recall certain things. And in the process I realized how much Suiku has changed over this 2 years. Originaly, Suiku was from a digimon story I cooped up. [Weird? Yup!] And I have to say...the story still looks good to me...hah* so many emotions in it and ideas like merging humans with a robot to form bio metalic soilders named dreads. And apparently it's closely related to my other story which also includes Suiku. Well, before everything I have to say...my writing style was horrible...more like a script.
Here's the entire thing:
Digimon Tamerz [Spirit]
Disclaimer:
I don’t own digimon
FINISH IT!!!!!!…….PRYO SPHERE!!
Suiku: Good work guilmon .
It has been one hold week since I’have been playing this game….Guilmon finally listens to me.! Hah..
It all begun when I received an email from my friend Triya .It was about a new game in the mall it was called ‘The Digital World’. I went to check it out and tried the game, you have to sit in a chair with a helmet, which would transport your mind to this online world. When I first started the first thing I saw was Guilmon and well...he bit me!it was only until I met ken did we both realized how this game worked ….flashback…..
Ken: Ready?
Suiku: Bring it on!
Guilmon started to charge at Monodramon. Monodramon stood still and waited for his orders. Ken then slash a card and transmitted the commands to Monodramon through his d-slash [a watch like D-arc with a laser sensor to transmit commands to your digimon] Monodramon then jumped into the air and grained two metal blades on both arms then slashed the air creating a razor wind blasting Guilmon.
Suiku: Guilmon get ready!
Guilmon: I’ll fight my own battles I don’t need your help!
Guilmon then charged forward again, Monodramon then slashed him back and prepared to release the final blow.
Ken: Do it!
Monodramon: REAON SLASH
A powerful wave of energy was released towards Guilmon
Ken: Good a direct hit.
Suiku grinning: I don’t think so!
A wargreymon’s shield was protecting Guilmon.
Guilmon: What….why?
Suiku: That’s a silly question, I’m your tamer we are supposed to work together!
Guilmon: Heh….agreed.
Together: Lets do this!
Suiku then took out a card and slashed it
Suiku: Card slash Angel wings activate!
Angel wings then was equipped to Guilmon. Guilmon then flew to the sky and fired a string of fireballs.
Suiku: Now close range!
Guilmon then flew down and used a rock breaker, but Monodramon dodge it.
Ken: You maybe able to work with your digimon now, but don’t forget Monodramon aint alone as well I can see all your moves you cant surprise us. We will win!
Suiku: Heh ..then looks like we have to do something different!
Ken: Well you better do something quick cause I aren’t going to give you time to think. MONODRAMON!!!
Monodramon then started to deliver a series of attacks to Guilmon.
Suiku: Guilmon fly to the air, it will be easier to dodge his attacks!
Ken: Do you really think it is that easy! Monodramon... JUMP! Your wing blades will help you gild in the air!
Suiku: Damn it!
Looks like we have no choice we wont keep running. We will fight head on!
Card Slash! Battle Claws activate!
Metal claws were equipped to Guilmon. And both digimon claws were clashed into each other!
Guilmon: Iron breaker!
Monodramon: Reaon slash!
Both energy claws and blades exploded and both digimons fall to the ground.
Suiku: Guilmon! If you still can get up hit him with all you got! GGGGGUUUUUUUIIIIIILLLLLMMMMMOOOOONNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Guilmon eyes opened!
But so did monodramon
PRYO BLASTER!
Ken: What!! But how..Guilmon cant do a pryo blaster that’s his champion forms attack…aaaahhh damn . Monodramon give it everything you got!!!!!!!!!!
REAZON GUSH!!!!!!!!!!
Both attacks hit each other..
Suiku Ken :FINISH IT!
Guilmon was left standing……
Suiku: whew..
Ken: heh you won.
Suiku : it was close.
Ken: well next time we meet we will be the ones who are the winners.
Suiku: we’ll see
Ken: until then choy, comon monodramon.
[Flash back ended]
Suiku: Well we still have a long way to go to the tournament………
To be continued…soon
Ep2
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Then came my past comics of the series as well. Suiku was previously wearing a jacket and googles, now he wears a black long robe and glasses. His hair style changed quite alot as well. Well...the comic drawings were simple but at least I completed a chapter unlike now...too much detail, hard to finish. There were all together 3 seasons...the first was juz showing about his life in the game, "The digital world" the second was the war between humans and digimon, finally was the revolution.
Here's the climax of the second season:
Spirit
In a world of darkness…a modern world?
In a digital world…a world willed with hearts…
Which would you chose?
Prologue [The night it ended]
[Gradientmon is referred to as Suiku/ biomergence: the combining of human and digimon]
The sun was setting, soon it would be night. The night where the war between digimon and humans would end. Suiku walked forward towards the army of mobile suits code named, 'dreads'. The dreads surrounded the base of the humans which was also the first official citiy of the humans, but one stood out from the rest. Its amour was different as well, and it stood at the centre of the army, in front of their base his pilot’s name was Zehurs. Suiku than merged with his digimon Guilmon,to form Gradientmon.
As he walked towards Zehurs the dreads that were in front of him stepped aside. As Suiku stopped, the army formed a gap of line. One end stood Suiku, the other stood Zehurs. "It ends tonight Zehurs." Suiku said as he took out his sword. Zehurs replied, "Indeed…" Suiku looked up at the other larger dreads, which make up the army. Zehurs saw and began to speak, “ You don’t have to worry about them, and it will be a one on one match. Besides, we all know who is going to win." Suiku replied, "That would be an advantage for me, so since it’s like this, I wont use my sword to be fair." "Suit yourself…"Zehurs thought to himself.
Both of them charged against each other at an incredible speed, as they clashed against each other an explosion of force was released causing the raindrops to fly in all different directions. Zehurs had caught Suiku's punch, Suiku then spun his body in mid air releasing his fist and then with the momentum Suiku delivered a kick to Zehurs. The kick caused a powerful impact causing Zehurs to crash into a building. "Argh! You can never defeat me!" Zehurs shouted as he flew to the skies. "Don’t underestimate me…" Suiku said as he watched Zehurs flew to the skies. Zehurs charged his lighting beam weapon at Suiku, two giant balls of lighting was fired at Suiku. Suiku didn’t dodge it, but instead he held the two balls back using an unseeable force. He then threw it back at Zehurs, Zehurs was caught by surprised but he was still able to dodge it. " What did you just do! What was that force?" Zehurs shouted angrily. Suiku didn’t replied but instead raised his hand and used the same force again, Zehurs dread couldn’t move due to the force. The dread was then pushed to the ground with that incredible force.
Zehurs became even more angry, he fired multiple balls of lighting at Suiku, but Suiku deflected all of them. Suiku slowly walked towards Zehurs, Zehurs continued firing at Suiku but it was useless. Soon Suiku was standing in front of Zehurs, he grabed Zehurs by the neck and whispered to his ear, " You are the one who is weak,…" He then punch and kick Zehurs’s dread til it was unable to funtion properly. Zehurs was defeated, but the imperial was still strong, " You won’t win Suiku, the imperial still has an army of dreads to battle you." With that he activated the whole army and all of them was now aiming their beam weapons at Suiku.
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By now Suiku was refered to as a sad and lonely character. Fully dressed in black and lived just for the sake of living. His background, parents divorced...not that good at making friends as it was hard to find people who understood him, well basicaly just like my background. Then camed the idea era of robots, I drew "Dawn" and really liked him. So I created a counter-part "Vader". Thus another series was created:
Drifting from reality
What do you do when you feel more alive in a dream, than in reality?
What do you do when you can’t find what you’re looking for?
What do you do when you sing to dreamless people…and it all just burst out?
In a world where there’s a virtual reality, and in that reality a war emerges...between two countries...that led to an all out world war...
In a world where your dreams are just dead, forced to give it up because of war...and you become just like everybody else...dreamless...
A story of the fifth world war, a story of a boy’s struggle...
Interwilled~
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At first called "Vast reality", then "Interwilled". And now proably the final product, One's reality~ the side story to my other story Ragnarok ~The third wills. The name Suiku: actually just poped out of nowhere. It came to me in the form of chinese words "who's crying?" "sui-ku?" Apparently I was feeling low and well...suddenly his name poped out. Now I feel like he's part of me, my other self, perhaps the colder side...the one whose hurt, it was like he sense me and came to me with the question "Who's crying?" [If you have lasted this far, you have my thanks. hah...*]
And well here's the part on "One's reality":
"The awakening" [part one]
It was a cold quiet morning, a young boy and girl stood at the middle of the road. "You know I'll have to leave soon, so where is he? " the girl asked while holding a suitcase full with her things." Your right, where is he?" the boy replied.*Beep!*The girl looked back to see a car waiting for her . She tooked out two neckalaces, each with a half which can be joined together to form a V- shape, and then gave it to the boy. She then took out her own and wore it. "I have to go now, give one of them to him. So that if we meet in the future we can reconizge each other by this..." She then boarded the car and began to set off for the airport.Just then! Another young boy ran out from an alleyway, just in time to see the car set off. Without catching his breath, he continued to run after the car. However, he couldn't catch up... suddenly from behind him he heard a voice. " Suiku! Grab my hand!" the other boy had rode on a hover board and catched up with him. They then began to chase after the car, Suiku reached out his hand towards the car in hope of reaching it. The girl in the car realised that and quickly opened the window to reach out for his hand. With much despearation, Suiku's hand almost touched her's before the hover board began to slow down. "Kira! We need to go faster!!!" Suiku exclaimed! "We can't...it ran out of power..." he replied."Erika!!!!!!!!!!!!"In great frustration, Suiku shouted out as loudly as he could for her...while in his mind thinking, "I didn't even got to say goodbye..."
*Flashback over*
Ten years have past since then...and so it begins, the rain of power ~Somewhere in tokyo,"d**nit! I can't be late! No matter what!" A young teenager sped across the streets with his hover cycle, police hover cars began to chase it. Meanwhile at the shores of tokoyo, a dark aircraft began to approach tokoyo. As it flew closer, two particle guns began charging to strike. At the military head quarters of tokoyo, "Sir! we have discovered an unidentified object approaching the shores." "Shoot it down..." he replied.Soon the particle guns fired at the bridge Suiku was speeding across. The shots hit just infront of him, that part of the bridge infront was destroyed. However Suiku didn't stop, instead he increased his speed and jumped over the broken bridge.The commander of the aircraft then said, "Heh, prepare to capture the twilight, send him out."As Suiku reached the place appointed to meet his old friends again, the aircraft was already hovering above him. Kira the began to desend from the aircraft..."Kira?...where is she?" Suiku asked with a puzzled look."Up there, but first hand over your neckalace!" Kira replied."You don't honestly believe I'll do that, do you..." Suiku asked calmly.
Soon, the drones started to chase Suiku, he quickly started up his hovercycle again and charge through the streets once more. The drones pursued him rentlessly, with each passing second they were getting closer and closer. No matter how many turns Suiku did at the allys, the drones continued to reduce their distance between them. Finally, Suiku could stand no more. He pulled out his machine guns, slidded his hovercycle into a open road juntion and began blasting the drones. One by one drones beagn to fall, but many more came in their place. Soon Suiku ran out of bullets and had to retreat again. The new drones began to open fire at Suiku, Suiku tried to dodge the blasts of prism the best he could, but there were too many to possibly dodge. Soon his hovercycle took too many hits and was at it's limit. Suiku opened a secret hatch and pushed a red button. He then jumped into the air as his hovercycle began to dismental and out flys a hoverboard. Suiku landed on the board and made another turn. He found himself near the mountain area and up infront was a hideout that his father had onced showed to him. "Why did I led myself here?" he thought to himself. He quickly entered the cave and hovered his way through the tunnels. Soon he reached upon a dead end and a hole in the ground filled with glowing liquid. He remembered his father telling him that this was a rare natural liquid the is used in lamps to save power. He remembered coming here to look at the glow whenever he felt low. Without a choice Suiku jumped into the liquid, however he kept falling. He looked up and realized that it was just a hollowgram. "You lied..." he said within his heart. Soon he fell down and slided into a very big room which housed a structured which he remembered when he was young. He remembered this room very well, it was his father's lab and workplace. "Computer, close all exits and entrances immmediately!" he shouted. Soon all the doors and hatches were shut tighted and left the drones unable to reach their target.
"The awakening" [part two]
The doors began to open, the mountain could be seen to have been hollow. "Rumora Suiku, plioting Dawn, launch!" A white robot began to assend into the sky. "You remember don't you? When you were young, you loved this simulation game. You and kira always chanllenge each other in the game. However it was actually to train you to pliot this machine before your eyes. I'm sorry that almost everything was a lie. I truly am...I couldn't tell you the truth, you were just a kid back then...and more importantly my son. I couldn't bear to fill your life with sorrow like mine. Your mum left me, you was the only thing I had left by me. Seeing you coming home each day from school with a big smile on your face really brighten up my day...how could I bear to let it go...I figuered that you would have be happier if you didn't know the truth. This machine is my final gift to you...use it well, somehow I feel that you would fight Kira again in this...but nah it's impossible..." :TRANSMISION ENDED_
"Father..." Suiku said sliently.Blade fighter jets soon began to take notice of the white robot. Some began to attack it, thinking that it was with the enemy. The others continued to go after the dark aircraft. However their fighter's blades and guns were unable to break through the craft's thick shield platting."I hope this is the right number..." Suiku said as he began to punch numbers into the transmitted. "Trix! It's me, hold your fire!" Suiku reported. One of the fighters then sent back another transmision."Suiku? But how? Why?" Trix replied. "Argh, nevermind troops! Concentrate your attacks on the dark aircraft instead, do not bother about the white robot!" Trix said as he transmitted the message to the other fighter pilots."Heh! It seems we have company, prepare Vader! I'm going out." Kira shouted towards the soilders under his command. As he watched them go, he thought to himself, " Man...these soilders are just plain weird, they dressed in black and we can't even see any part of their skin. They don't reply at all, and I don't think they have taken even a single break since the beganing of this journey. Either they are really disiplined or they aren't human...well anyway, got to concentrate."Meanwhile Suiku was getting used to the controls again. "See with the eyes of your mind, fight with your will and spirit, release everything into the spheres under your palms." he recited to himself."Lets do this!" he shouted as the spheres underneath his palms began to glow. Dawn's eyes began to glow brighter and it was ready for battle. Dawn charged towards the dark aircraft as the cago doors of the aircraft opened slowly. "Kira Eavalence piloting Vader, launch!" Vader dropped from the doors and stretched out it's metalic wings taking flight. The two robots soon clashed into each other, Dawn tried to jab Vader but it's attacks was quickly blocked but Vader's spear.Meanwhile at the military post near the coast, a mega particle gun had already been fully charged. "Get out of the way!" The commander at the post shouted into the transmitter. Hearing this, Trix shouted to his fellow pilots through the transmitted, "You heard him men, scramble! Scramble!" The blade fighters began to fly off in different directions, making sure they were out of the way. However Dawn and Vader were still clashed together and in the way of the gun. "We can't hold the energy for long sir, we have to release it soon or it'll blow right in our faces!" one of the soilders controling the gun reported. "Fine! If they won't move then we'll fire!" the commander replied.Soon the gun fired a mega particle beam towards the aircraft. Kira soon noticed the beam, and transmitted a message to Suiku before taking off. "She's still in the aircraft you know..." Suiku understood it perfectly and turned back, with Dawn's hand in a stop position. An energy shield form from it's hand, defending itself and the aircraft as well. As soon as Kira arrived back the craft, he heard a voice shouting at him. "How could you leave just like that! You do know if he can't protect us against the beam, it will easily tear this ship's shields apart!""Don't worry, I know him better then you do...he will protect this ship no matter what happens...cause he wants to see you...heh." Kira replied calmly."d**nit! It's strong...I don't think I can hold it for long...no I musn't give in!" Suiku thought to himself. Dawn began to use it's other hand to combine both energy shields. With the energy shield releasing a negative force of the beam and a mighty roar, Dawn ripped the energy beam into shreds."See? There was nothing to worry about...now, lets get out of here." Kira comforted the voice.
"What the f***! How could anything survied let alone ripped it into shreds! Get the pilot here at once!" the commander shouted angrily. If news got out, japan would have been shamed as one of it's most powerful weapons had been so easily defeated. During this period of time, war is very common. Many countries are waiting for another to make the first move. Each country had concentrated all it's resources into it's military. Ever since the third world war which was suposed to be considered over a few months ago, countries began to improve their defences and military power. Now each country stands await of any signs of war.Soon enough Suiku found himself infront of the commander. "What did you think you were doing! We told you to get out of the way, didn't we!" the commander shouted at Suiku. "Sorry sir! I didn't catch your command sir!" Suiku replied. Suddenly from out of no where another voice entered the room. "Enough is enough Suiku, stop toying with the man." "Heh, sorry I couldn't help it...he sounded so angry." Suiku replied cheerfully."What? Huh?" the commander said in a confused way."His rank is higher then yours, as a matter of fact you have no power to shout at him like that at all. His been granted freedom over any military commands accept for people higher ranked then him. He's part of a special force used to infiltrate enemie's bases, so in a way you can call him a spy.""So it's you...General Slifar, or should I say uncle?" Suiku replied calmly.
And well, with this I have made the longest post I have ever done. And proably also the longest post you have read...or given up halfway through. [now I have this weird childish feeling to say, if you read the entire thing, hah! made you read! ] If you didn't, well that's too bad...it's your own choice, I can't control it.Well, if you did made it here then post it on the tagboard and make yourself heard.
"Though we feel that we have nothing left."
"As long as we stay alive...someday we'll be glad that we survived."
"It may be far in the future...but until then lets live on"
"Even on a black and empty street...if we go together...we might one day find something...like the moon that floats in the darkness"
~Neon Genesis Evangelion
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